Thursday, April 4, 2019

Avoiding the dishes



Avoiding the dishes

As I was playing rugby with Jayden as always I heard my Dad whooped “dishes” so I dadeled to the kitchen with disappointment. “come on” my Dad said so I yelled i need to go toilet so I raced to the toilet and sat on the ground waiting for the dishes to be done. so I pecked out and saw no one there but dishes waiting… . I took a deep breath and out with a lazy look. I leisurely went out and resized the heat dried every thing for so I fortunately packed them away and hasten to Jayden to play rugby.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 8, 2019 at 10:05 AM

    i like how you used interesting language
    by karlos

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  2. AnonymousApril 8, 2019 at 10:07 AM

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    by karlos

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  3. AnonymousApril 9, 2019 at 9:45 AM

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  4. AnonymousMay 10, 2019 at 2:52 PM

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