This week Room 2 and myself have been learning about interesting language using Nouns,
Adjectives,Verbs and Adverbs, here's a poem that I wrote using interesting language.
The bright green trees flow against the wind as the tall building looks above,
The calm blue ocean lays majestically,
The shiny white boats wait silently. 
i like how you really thought about what you where writing
ReplyDeletei liked how you took your time
ReplyDeletemaybe you can write more sentence to make the reader more interested
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