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i think that you can do more writing. i like the majestically reflect's in the third sentence. i can tell that you paid attention to the pitcher and i can see the reflection in the sand
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i think that you can do more writing. i like the majestically reflect's in the third sentence. i can tell that you paid attention to the pitcher and i can see the reflection in the sand
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