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Wednesday, May 20, 2020
How i survived Lockdown
This is what me and my family has done in lockdown. in the right conner there is what i rember the most.
Hi Storm, I'm Larz from your old school. I saw that you commented on my blog so i'm commenting on your blog. I like that you provided information of what you and your siblings did. I also like how you wrote a paragraph based on every thing you have done. Something I think you could to to make it even better would be to space the writing a little more apart but besides that you did really well. From Larz :D
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Hi Storm,
ReplyDeleteI'm Larz from your old school. I saw that you commented on my blog so i'm commenting on your blog. I like that you provided information of what you and your siblings did. I also like how you wrote a paragraph based on every thing you have done. Something I think you could to to make it even better would be to space the writing a little more apart but besides that you did really well.
From Larz :D